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		<title>Comment on Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing by Julie Toft</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2011/03/04/top-10-crimes-of-online-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-6052</link>
		<dc:creator>Julie Toft</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Mar 2011 11:40:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>10. linking instead of explaining. It annoys me, if the writer doesn&#039;t bother to explain or clarify difficult parts/concepts but links to a wikipedia page instead. That&#039;s just laziness. All the info you need to understand the text should be in the text. I think. 

Great post, by the way.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>10. linking instead of explaining. It annoys me, if the writer doesn&#8217;t bother to explain or clarify difficult parts/concepts but links to a wikipedia page instead. That&#8217;s just laziness. All the info you need to understand the text should be in the text. I think. </p>
<p>Great post, by the way.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing by Chie Elliott</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2011/03/04/top-10-crimes-of-online-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-6051</link>
		<dc:creator>Chie Elliott</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Mar 2011 22:03:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post, Caroline, with good points we all need to be reminded of from time to time (it&#039;s so easy to get carried away or become too lazy...), whether we are pros or beginners. PS: I didn&#039;t know about Zemanta -- top tip, thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post, Caroline, with good points we all need to be reminded of from time to time (it&#8217;s so easy to get carried away or become too lazy&#8230;), whether we are pros or beginners. PS: I didn&#8217;t know about Zemanta &#8212; top tip, thanks!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing by URL Gist! &#171; Diary of a Media Junkie</title>
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		<dc:creator>URL Gist! &#171; Diary of a Media Junkie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Mar 2011 08:46:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Online Journalism student dropped heavy tips on the Top Ten Crimes of Online Writing. If I thought I had it all together, this young lady told me WASSAP! It is a punchy and informative [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Online Journalism student dropped heavy tips on the Top Ten Crimes of Online Writing. If I thought I had it all together, this young lady told me WASSAP! It is a punchy and informative [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing by links for 2011-03-04 &#171; Sarah Booker</title>
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		<dc:creator>links for 2011-03-04 &#171; Sarah Booker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Mar 2011 18:01:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing (tags: journalism teaching online) [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing by Andy Mabbett</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2011/03/04/top-10-crimes-of-online-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-6048</link>
		<dc:creator>Andy Mabbett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Mar 2011 16:20:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>10. Expecting your readers to do the work for you. ;-)

(Actually, that&#039;s quite a good technique for encouraging debate)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>10. Expecting your readers to do the work for you. <img src='http://carolinebeavon.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>(Actually, that&#8217;s quite a good technique for encouraging debate)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing by Joseph Stashko</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2011/03/04/top-10-crimes-of-online-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-6047</link>
		<dc:creator>Joseph Stashko</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Mar 2011 15:36:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Somewhat in breach of point 6 here ;)

Good post, I&#039;d really agree with the paragraph thing, readability is so much improved by breaking up text in 3 or 4 line chunks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Somewhat in breach of point 6 here <img src='http://carolinebeavon.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Good post, I&#8217;d really agree with the paragraph thing, readability is so much improved by breaking up text in 3 or 4 line chunks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Top 10 Crimes of Online Writing by Pete Ashton</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2011/03/04/top-10-crimes-of-online-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-6046</link>
		<dc:creator>Pete Ashton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Mar 2011 15:29:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>10. Ignore the rules. Sometimes you just gotta break them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>10. Ignore the rules. Sometimes you just gotta break them.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Text speek &#8211; innit by Midge D</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2011/01/06/text-speek-innit/comment-page-1/#comment-6035</link>
		<dc:creator>Midge D</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jan 2011 13:39:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>iirc- If i recall/remember correctly</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>iirc- If i recall/remember correctly</p>
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		<title>Comment on Why don&#8217;t students use Twitter? by Andy Halls</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2010/11/25/why-dont-students-use-twitter/comment-page-1/#comment-6029</link>
		<dc:creator>Andy Halls</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Nov 2010 07:59:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree that Twitter seems to be used by a minority of students.

I&#039;m leading a discussion today on challenges journalists face in the modern newsroom, as part of a University assignment, and have had to tone down the Twitter content, as of a class of around 10 of us, just my co-presenter and I have active accounts.

My main worry with Twitter is that it takes a while to see the appeal, at least in the eyes of everyday individuals testing it out for the first time.

I use Twitter, mainly, for journalistic means. It&#039;s a good opportunity to network, and connect with people I wouldn&#039;t have been able to but by chance. 

When my friends ask me, &#039;so what&#039;s the point of Twitter?&#039; I usually find myself responding with a sentence similar to &#039;well, I use it for journalism, but I&#039;m not sure&#039;.

Other than being a great opportunity stalk celebrities and see follows &#039;trends&#039;, what is the real appeal of Twitter?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree that Twitter seems to be used by a minority of students.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m leading a discussion today on challenges journalists face in the modern newsroom, as part of a University assignment, and have had to tone down the Twitter content, as of a class of around 10 of us, just my co-presenter and I have active accounts.</p>
<p>My main worry with Twitter is that it takes a while to see the appeal, at least in the eyes of everyday individuals testing it out for the first time.</p>
<p>I use Twitter, mainly, for journalistic means. It&#8217;s a good opportunity to network, and connect with people I wouldn&#8217;t have been able to but by chance. </p>
<p>When my friends ask me, &#8216;so what&#8217;s the point of Twitter?&#8217; I usually find myself responding with a sentence similar to &#8216;well, I use it for journalism, but I&#8217;m not sure&#8217;.</p>
<p>Other than being a great opportunity stalk celebrities and see follows &#8216;trends&#8217;, what is the real appeal of Twitter?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Myspace OFF Google search? UPDATED by caroline</title>
		<link>http://carolinebeavon.com/2010/11/23/myspace-off-google-search/comment-page-1/#comment-6028</link>
		<dc:creator>caroline</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Nov 2010 15:02:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s a real shame: Myspace is a terrible social network nowadays but it&#039;s a perfect entertainment site. This is what Facebook has spotted and wish to cash in on by this new deal. Lets hope they sort this out soon.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s a real shame: Myspace is a terrible social network nowadays but it&#8217;s a perfect entertainment site. This is what Facebook has spotted and wish to cash in on by this new deal. Lets hope they sort this out soon.</p>
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